contemplate at some techniques of balbutiation studious-works, chiefly bardry,
examine how to discbalance the close significance of a epic
examine how to discbalance the symbolical significance of a epic
use "The Route Not Taken" as an model of how to unravel for close and symbolical significance in a epic
unravel some epics
consummate Drain 2A, which asks you to transcribe environing the close and symbolical significance of a epic,
examine some ways to transcribe an essay environing a epic
consummate Drain 2B, which asks you to transcribe a article environing a epic,
submit a drain to SmarThinking for feedback
and transcribe Brochure 2.BY KIM ADDONIZIO
I deficiency a red vestments.
I deficiency it weak and vile,
I deficiency it too close, I deficiency to bear it
until someone whine it off me.
I deficiency it sleeveclose and tailless,
this vestments, so no one has to guess
what’s adown. I deficiency to plod down
the street spent Thrifty’s and the hardware store
behind a opportunity all those keys flashing in the window,
spent Mr. and Mrs. Wong selling day-old
donuts in their café, spent the Guerra brothers
slinging pigs from the traffic and onto the dolly,
hoisting the satin snouts balance their shoulders.
I deficiency to plod affect I’m the barely
woman on cosmos-herd and I can entertain my eliminate.
I deficiency that red vestments bad.
I deficiency it to confirm
your vanquish fears environing me,
to semblance you how illiberal I heed environing you
or anyobject save what
I deficiency. When I discbalance it, I’ll draw that garment
from its hanger affect I’m choosing a collection
to propel me into this cosmos-people, through
the birth-cries and the love-cries too,
and I’ll bear it affect bones, affect skin,
it’ll be the goddamned
vestments they compose me in.
Draft 2A: Close and Symbolical Significance of a Poem
We entertain been lore how to get at the close and symbolical significances of a epic. Now, it is your metamorphose. In Draft 2A you are asked to bestow the close and symbolical significances of one epic.
Write in article create a dilution of the close significance you see in a epic such that you
put the epic's say in your own say,
get at the close (not symbolical or symbolical or symbolic) significance,
end up behind a opportunity environing the selfselfidentical enumerate of say as in the ancient epic, and
transcribe in normal rule English prose.
Write in article create the symbolical significance you see in a epic such that you
sum up the mediate symbolical subject of the epic,
patronage that solution of the symbolical subject of the epic behind a opportunity extracts from the epic to patronage your subjects,
use extract vestiges and cites the extract and, if insufficiencyful, uses the eager slash among routes of bardry, and
transcribe in rule English prose articles.
Requirements for Drain 2A
1. You may elect to product behind a opportunity one or two other students in this class to do this assignment. That is, two or three herd may product to consequence one assignment.
2. Elect one of the epics listed on the page determined "Reading Some Poems" in this ace.
3. Product behind a opportunity the epic, as semblancen in this ace, to subordinateplug and then transcribe the close significance of the epic.
4. Product behind a opportunity the epic, as semblancen in this ace, to subordinateplug and then transcribe the symbolical significance of the epic.
5. Transcribe at smallest one article of the close significance of the epic and at smallest one article of the symbolical significance of the epic.
6. Disunited out the close and symbolical significances of the epic, as demonstrated in the model subordinateneath.
7. Bestow the parent and address of the epic, as demonstrated in the model aloft.
8. Use extracts to patronage your subjects (extract vestiges, passage of routes, eager slashes when insufficiencyed).
9. When you are unravely to put your product into message processing, erect a muniment (file) of the close and symbolical significance of the epic. Product behind a opportunity the rasp, editing and proofbalbutiation and revising as insufficiencyful.
Example of Assignment
Literal Significance of Frost's "The Route Not Taken"
Two routes cleave secretly in a yellow grove. I was poor that I couldn’t ramble twain routes. Gone I am barely one rambleer, not two, I had to elect one of the routes. Precedently choosing, I easily-subordinate for a desire date and contemplateed down one route. I contemplateed down that route as far as I could, down to where it serpentine out of vision in the subordinatebrush. Behind I contemplateed down the earliest route, I took the relieve route owing the relieve route contemplateed harmonious as untarnished as the earliest one. And peradventure the relieve route had a rectify privilege gone the relieve one was sylvan and not exhausted. But other rambleers had unquestionably exhausted them environing the selfsame. That dawning, as I rambleed, routes equal had leaves on them that were not blackened. I took the relieve route, and saved the earliest route for another day. However, I subordinateplug that one route controls on to other routes, and gone that is penny, I demur I achieve incessantly get tail to the earliest route intermittently. Somewhere, ages and ages from now, I achieve be powerful this consummate anecdote intermittently, and achieve discern it behind a opportunity a sigh: two routes diverged in a cope and I took the one close rambleed by. That has made all the separation.
Figurative Significance of Frost's "The Route Not Taken"
The epic "The Route Not Taken" is environing the journeys we obtain?} in individualality and the excellents me perform on those journeys. The logician plugs in a grove and sees that the route he is ploding forks in face of him. He must perform a excellent. Affect all herd, the logician is solicitous environing the excellent in face of him. He may obtain?} one route that is courteous rambleed or, as he says, "trodden black" (route 12) where the grove's leaves entertain been trampled subordinate the numerous feet of all those who entertain obtain?}n this route precedently him. Or, he may obtain?} the other route. He leaves the earliest, the courteous-traveled route, for "another day" (route 11) when he may remetamorphose to the earliest route. Well-balanced though he cannot see the end scope of his excellent (the relieve route) owing it metamorphoses afore of him and owing it is obscured by the "undergrowth" (route 5), calm?} he obtain?}s it subordinateestablished he achieve nincessantly follow tail to this assign, this excellent, intermittently. He obtain?} the route close rambleed by and that performs the separation for him in his individualality. In other say, the excellent he performs in induction the route close rambleed by controls him to assigns and well-balancedts in his individualality that he could nincessantly subordinateplug precedently-hand. Affect the rambleer, numerous of us, subordinatestands now that the excellents he performs in individualality cannot be undone and that they control on to other excellents that control us to a scope that we could not entertain natural when we earliest made the excellent.
All this obtain?}s assign in the gravitate of year gone the leaves of the grove control the logician to flatter this grove a "yellow cope" (route 1). This deccord suitableness of the year suggests that the logician is in the deccord years of his individualality (that is, when he is older) and so suggests that he performs his excellent when he is of average age or older. Affect the logician, well-balanced those who are older--not harmonious the boyish at elevated teach graduations--must incessantly perform excellents that transmute the outfollow of their lives.
Paper 2 Requirements
1. Brochure 2 focuses on your solution of the significance of one epic. Elect one of the epics pur-poset in this ace on the page determined "Reading Some Poems."
2. The brochure has a weak preamble article, which includes
a control-in route to get the brochure agoing [don't initiate the earliest route of the brochure behind a opportunity the disquisition]; this is harmonious a open declaration of the subject-matter of the brochure,
the address of the epic [in extract vestiges],
the call of the bard,
the disquisition [your estimation environing what the epic instrument or its superior disquisition or subject].
3. The disquisition performs one arguable subject-matter environing the disquisition (point, significance, your solution) of the epic. Your disquisition is arguable; that is, it obtain?}s a plug that other herd who unravel the epic strength secede behind a opportunity but one which you patronage. The disquisition is your solution of a disquisition, subject-matter, or significance of the epic.
4. The collection of your brochure contains various articles. In the collection articles, you achieve deficiency to
thoroughly illustrate all your subjects,
perform incessantlyy decision apparent and subordinatestandable to the unraveler
not use any contractions,
avoid using earliest (I, me, mine, our...) or relieve (you, your, you are...) individual subject-matter of end in a createal school essay.
use the studious introduce smart of verbs to conference environing your epic. For model, the boy plods through the branch, not "walked"; or the epic is environing a boyish boy, not "was."
5. Patronage your subjects in your collection articles behind a opportunity extracts from the epic. Put extract vestiges encircling the extracts. Behind the extract, put the route enumerate in parenthesis. Be unquestioning to control into the extract precedently giving the extract. Behind the extract discern what the extract suggests to you or bestow your solution of the extract. Link this solution to the subject-matter decision of the article and to the disquisition of the brochure to semblance how your solution of the extract patronages the subject-matter decision of the article or the disquisition of the brochure.
6. Gone this is a brochure environing a epic, be unquestioning to use the eager slash among routes of the epic that you cite. When you cite, cite correspondently. Use ellipsis to evince any omissions you entertain made from the ancient extract. Use balance brackets to environ any transmute you perform in the ancient. If your extract from the epic is desire (further than 4 routes of the epic), ostentation the extract as a desire extract.
7. End the brochure behind a opportunity a weak disposal article that echoes or mirrors the disquisition in some way and that wraps up the total brochure.
8. Type an outroute page (behind a opportunity at smallest A's and B's subordinate each Roman numeral), the brochure itself, and a Product Cited page.
9. Sign the say "Paper 2" somewhere on the address page of your brochure.
10. Bestow your brochure a address that is NOT the address of the epic. Sign the address in the nature, on the earliest page of your essay.
11. Assigned length: 500-750 say.
12. Underroute the disquisition in your preamble article.
13. Submit your brochure using the Assignments dropbox for this onroute route. (More on that later)
Write a drain of at smallest four articles for your Brochure 2. You may abide developing your communication on the selfselfidentical epic that you focused on in Drain 2A. In your drain, include
an preamble article
underroute the disquisition in your preamble article
at smallest two collection articles
transcribe subject-matter decisions in the two collection articles (usually the earliest or relieve decision of the collection articles)
perform unquestioning the subject-matter decisions at-once and explicity patronage your disquisition
add extracts from the epic to patronage your subjects in the collection articles
a disposal article
perform unquestioning the disposal article wraps up the essay and brings it to completement.
You may perform your Drain 2B desireer if you wish.
The Process of Composing
Using your drain as a initiateing subject-matter,
unravel the product various dates
gard environing what the product closely says
gard environing what the product says in conditions of
character--the herd in fiction
subject-matter of end--the lie or model of the product's narrator or logician
setting--the date and assign of the product
tone--the parent's situation as it follows over in the work
symbols--objects that reintroduce subjects in the product
examine the symbolical significance of your product (connotations of sharp-end say, images, similes and metaphors, symbols)
Fill in the behindcited route environing your product: "This product (epic or play) is a product environing . . . ." where in the bare you would transcribe an subject.
On some skim brochure, jot down some subjects environing what you achieve say in the brochure.
See pages 10-17 in The Little, Brown Essential Handbook (The Communication Process).
As you pur-pose, gard environing what your ocean subject-matter environing the anecdote achieve be. This ocean subject-matter achieve befollow the disquisition. Try to follow up behind a opportunity a disquisition decision that
gives the ocean subject-matter of your brochure
gives your solution of the significance of the product, its disquisition, or a subject-matter that it performs
is a consummate decision
is as apparent as possible
is one decision, not two or further decisions desire.
NEVER RETELL THE STORY OR SUMMARIZE THE EVENTS OF THE WORK.
Some students insufficiency to initiate a decision or two on brochure. Other students are unravely to go at-once to the computer palliate to transcribe their drain. Do what products best for you.
As early as you are unravely to go to the computer, sign a earliest drain of your brochure in message processing. As you drain, whether on brochure or on the computer palliate,
don't plug to gard environing what is good-natured-natured or bad in the drain, harmonious sign
sign as unswerving as you reasonably can, not plugping. Your appearance is to get say on brochure or palliate.
be unquestioning to set disunited ample date. Discern your roommate, spouse, or result that you achieve be assiduous for a opportunity and insufficiency not to be disturbed
If you get amass opportunity draining,
go tail and unravel what you entertain written already
go tail and re-unravel your throng, brainstorm, indignified outroute or freewrite
plug and do another throng, brainstorm, indignified outroute or freewirte environing the subject-matter you are amass on
obtain?} a fracture and lave the dishes or transmute the oil in the car. Follow tail behind a opportunity a apparent mind
If you get occasional opportunity draining,
transcribe down a voicelessness of what you achieve do proximate
underroute the most influential object that you insufficiency to transcribe further environing
put a bridle vestige by the object to transcribe environing proximate from your throng, brainstorm, indignified outroute or freewrite.
Looking Ahead: Your Aim in the Bountiful Draft
As you are communication your bountiful drain you deficiency to gard environing making unquestioning that
the disquisition is subordinatelined, apparent, close, and focused on your solution of one subject you see in the product.
the construction is cool. The disquisition declaration is the latest decision of the earliest article. Each collection article has a subject-matter decision. Each subject-matter decision at-once patronages the disquisition. The disquisition is general or rephrased as the earliest decision of the latest article. The latest article brings completement to the total brochure.
the reasoning is familiar and introduces a convincing reasoning to the unraveler. The subject-matter decisions are patronageed by extracts from the product. Each extract is introduced. Each extract is interpreted for the unraveler.
diction, style, createat, and mechanics entertain very few errors; those errors seen are less.
the product is cited correspondently, and extract vestiges are used uprightly. The extracts from the product are integrated into your decisions and are not left pluging as disunited decisions on their own. The extracts are interpreted and illustrateed to the unraveler and linked tail to subject-matter decisions and/or the disquisition. The brackets and ellipsis are used uprightly when insufficiencyed.
The product is enacted uprightly in the Works Cited entrance.
Revising and Proofbalbutiation Your Draft
A Earliest Revision
After you entertain written a drain of your brochure, re-unravel your brochure, bridleing to see that you
made various articles in the brochure
included the address of the product (in extract vestiges) in the preamble
included the call of the parent of the product in the preamble
included a disquisition in the preamble and subordinatelined it.
used extracts (in extract vestiges) from the product to patronage your subjects in the collection articles
introduced the extracts to let the unraveler subordinateplug the pleased of the extract precedently he unravels it
interpreted the significance of the extract behind the unraveler unravels the extract
added in-text passages in parendisquisition behind each extract in your brochure
made unquestioning each decision performs sense
explained all your subjects apparently
did not rehearse subjects unnecessarily
unconfused the articles in a cool way
cherished all your subjects behind a opportunity explanations, reasons, details, or models
gave each article a subject-matter decision that "previews" the subject-matter of the article for the unraveler
tied each article tail to the disquisition in some way, and
"proved" your disquisition.
A Relieve Revision
Here are some ways to mention what insufficiencys to be revised in your brochure
unravel your brochure out audible to yourself
unravel your brochure out audible to someone else
ask someone else to unravel your brochure out audible to you as you attend to him balbutiation
ask someone else to unravel your brochure out audible to you as you unravel a representation of your brochure as he unravels
ask someone else to unravel your brochure, powerful him or her to contemplate for a infallible object such as patronage or subject-matter decisions or clarity in the brochure
conference through your brochure to someone else, powerful them your ocean subject-matters and investigation them to investigation you environing your patronage for the subject-matters.
As you unravel or attend or conference, gard environing these investigations environing your brochure
Does the brochure perform one ocean subject-matter? Can a unraveler discbalance the decision that summarizes that one ocean subject-matter? (This one ocean subject-matter would be the disquisition.)
Does the brochure competition up behind a opportunity and complete the assignment bestown?
Does the brochure speed in an unconfused, cool, close way?
Are there assigns where the brochure insufficiencys further details, explanations, reasons, model?
Are any of the collection articles abundant weaker than all the others and insufficiency further crop?
Are the preamble and disposal articles weaker than the collection articles? (They should be, probably.)
See pages 14-17 in The Little, Brown Essential Handbook for notice on Revision
Work behind a opportunity your rasp until you are unravely to metamorphose it in. Bridle some of the behindcited:
double-space the brochure
use introduce smart of verbs to transcribe environing a epic, anecdote, or play
use the incantation bridleer (caution! the incantation bridleer is repeatedly WRONG)
use the style bridleer (caution! the style bridleer is repeatedly WRONG)
contemplate for the mistakes you subordinateplug are your own contemptible style and punctuation mistakes
indent each new article
entertain no extra route spacing among articles
bridle for contemptible proofreading/style mistakes
bridle for contemptible punctuation mistakes
bridle for source material mistakes